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Friday, March 22, 2019

My weekend on Planet Foofoo



My writing shows that I can be an exciting recount writer. I use imaginary words and interesting events to make my writing entertaining for my readers.

The sun comes up with a face.
I wake up and slip on some toys.
Elmo is watching me, it's his toys.
He was cross when he died in fortnite.
He broke the computer and went back to dance on the moon.
Oh it's Saturday I’m going to planet Foofoo. My drawing on the table was a paper clock, which is how I knew it was time to meet Toofoo the owner of planet Foofoo.
Well I didn't have breakfast yet??
I walk across to the fridge, well someone needs to do the dishes. I'm too lazy to get a bowl so I
just used the cereal pack as a bowl and drank the milk from it. It went all over my mouth so I just left the cereal pack on the bench soaking at the bottom of the pack. I go outdoors and also see mail sitting on my welcome carpet.
Oh! I just forgot, where’s my dog? I look out at the back yard and see my dog having a tea party.
I called “Bleh Blah Lak Lack!” That’s my friend I try to contact with my smartwatch. Well he didn’t answer.
I go over to his house and he’s just playing.
I told him, “Do you wanna come to planet Foofoo?”
He said, “OK.” We had to build the ship and wait till the rocket boosters are ready. We blasted off and flew to Planet Foofoo. I said, “We are at Planet Foofoo.”
I see an empty town with no things. I hear a pixel game sound, until I see a guy named Purple Guy.
He says, “Hello there, I’m Pixel Purple Guy.” I say, “Hi.” I say it in a strange way because I’m confused. I look back and see other things coming out. They thought I was memes.
To be continued……

My Creative Bird



I tried my best when I was creating my bird.
I am proud of doing lots of detail and making it colourful.